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Shinsui
Posts : 28 Join date : 2016-05-11
| Subject: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Mon May 30, 2016 3:44 am | |
| This is where you'll register any canon bukijutsu techniques, if they haven't already been registered. | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Mon May 30, 2016 7:46 am | |
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Name: Vacuum Sword Rank: C Element: Fuiton Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None. Description: By swinging their blade diagonally, a thin arc of wind release chakra is released deflecting projectiles, and blowing objects as heavy as people away in a 10 meter direction. It can be countered by a technique with 50 or more potency. This jutsu does 50 damage.
Name: Samurai Sabre Technique Rank: B Element: None. Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description: Chakra is poured into the user's blades and is shaped in various shapes/forms to increase destructive power, and reach-- the blade itself up to 15 meters. The blade can also be swung while the jutsu is active releasing chakra projectiles. The range of this projectiles extends up to 30 meters, and the size is that of a baseball-- it moves at a 20 m/s speed. The damage of the technique at close range is 120, while the projectiles deal 80 (plus the user's strength substat applied to both). This jutsu is unique to samurai characters. Upkeep of 10 chakra per post to keep this active.
Name: Flash Rank: C Element: Fuiton Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None Description: After coating a blade in chakra, slash diagonally to release a beam of light that 'damages' with 80 potency over a long range, it extends up to twenty meters. Travels 5 m/s. Causes sharp slicing damage to whatever it makes contact with.
Name: Cloud-Style Crescent Moon Beheading Rank: B-rank Element: None Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description: The user swings their sword in a single, large, crescent moon-shaped arc, which occurs where only a very limited time to react is available. The swing can be used to counter attacks from multiple opponents simultaneously as well as damage them. The attack moves 25 m/s plus the user's speed statistic, and deals 100 damage.
Name: Rupture Rank: C Element: Fuiton Type: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None Description: The user violently strikes with their weapon, after coating it in chakra. This jutsu requires the opposition be within reach. Rupture can stack with other sword-based jutsu, and can be sustained if by sacrificing and additional 5 chakra per post that is made. This buffs the user's physical strength by an additional basic in the respective field. [Extra 50 damage]
Name: Dance of the Crescent Moon Rank: A-rank Element: None Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: Seal of Confrontation Description: By manipulating two clones the user drives forth and proceeds by attacking from the above front, mid-right, and mid-left. A single strike from one of these blades will leave a fatal wound, or possibly even death. The attack's speed moves 40 m/s plus the addition of their speed substat. This ability can be deflected if a jutsu with a potency higher than 120 collides with it. Each blade deals 120 damage onto a target.
Last edited by Toga on Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:02 pm; edited 4 times in total | |
| | | Shinsui
Posts : 28 Join date : 2016-05-11
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Mon May 30, 2016 10:20 am | |
| - Toga wrote:
- Name: Vacuum Sword
Rank: C Element: Fuiton Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None. Description: By swinging their blade diagonally, a thin arc of wind release chakra is released knocking away projectiles, and blowing objects as heavy as people away in a 10 meter radius. It can be countered by a spell with fifty or more potency. This jutsu does 50 damage. "This is fine however you should probably replace the 'spell of 50 potency' with 'techniques of 50 potency'"
Name: Samurai Sabre Technique Rank: B Element: None. Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description: Chakra is poured into the user's blades and is shaped in various forms to increase destructive power, and reach. The blade can also be swung while this is active releasing chakra projectiles. This is unique to samurai characters. The range of this power extends up to 30 meters, and the damage is 120 plus the user's BODY stat. "Just making sure, it increases the weapon's length (through the use of chakra) up to 30 meters, or does the projectiles have the ability to reach up to 30 meters? Also, choose one of the substats, preferably strength, instead of the entire body stat collection."
Name: Flash Rank: C Element: Fuiton Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None Description: After coating a blade in chakra, slash diagonally to release a beam of light that stings with 80 damage/potency over long range, it extends up to twenty meters. Travels 5 m/s. "What does this sting do exactly?" Name: Rupture Rank: C Element: Fuiton Type: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None Description: The user violently strikes with their weapon, after coating it in chakra. This jutsu requires the opposition be within reach. Rupture can stack with other sword-based jutsu, and can be sustained if by sacrificing and additional 5 chakra per post that is made. "I'm unsure what the purpose is of this jutsu. What kind of strikes? How fast are they? Do they get additional speed due to this technique?"
Name: Cloud-Style Crescent Moon Beheading Rank: B-rank Element: None Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description: The user swings their sword in a single, large, crescent moon-shaped arc, which occurs where only a very limited time to react is available. The swing can be used to counter attacks from multiple opponents simultaneously as well as damage them. The attack moves 25 m/s plus the user's speed statistic, and deals 100 damage. "Approved."
Name: Dance of the Crescent Moon Rank: A-rank Element: None Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: Seal of Confrontation Description: By manipulating two clones the user drives forth and proceeds by attacking from the above front, mid-right, and mid-left. A single strike from one of these blades will leave a fatal wound, or possibly even death. The attack's speed moves 40 m/s plus the addition of their body stat. This ability can be deflected if a jutsu with a potency higher than 120 collides with it. Each blade deals 120 damage onto a target. "Please replace 'body stat' with one of the three stats within the body stat collection, preferably speed." | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Mon May 30, 2016 9:21 pm | |
| Edit:
Name: Vacuum Sword Rank: C Element: Fuiton Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None. Description: By swinging their blade diagonally, a thin arc of wind release chakra is released knocking away projectiles, and blowing objects as heavy as people away in a 10 meter radius. It can be countered by a technique with 50 or more potency. This jutsu does 50 damage.
Name: Samurai Sabre Technique Rank: B Element: None. Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description: Chakra is poured into the user's blades and is shaped in various shapes/forms to increase destructive power, and reach. The blade can also be swung while this is active releasing chakra projectiles. This is unique to samurai characters. The range of this projectiles extends up to 30 meters, and the damage of both methods is 120 plus the user's strength substat. [Projectiles technically, but the blade itself can be lengthened as well according to the wiki. I was told to keep these descriptions short and that was a mistake on my end, sorry for not clarifying.]
Name: Flash Rank: C Element: Fuiton Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None Description: After coating a blade in chakra, slash diagonally to release a beam of light that 'damages' with 80 potency over a long range, it extends up to twenty meters. Travels 5 m/s.
Name: Rupture Rank: C Element: Fuiton Type: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: None Description: The user violently strikes with their weapon, after coating it in chakra. This jutsu requires the opposition be within reach. Rupture can stack with other sword-based jutsu, and can be sustained if by sacrificing and additional 5 chakra per post that is made. [Well, I noticed the wikia was vague with what it could do, but basically it adds powerful chakra onto a blade, so I assumed it could stack with other bukijutsu, such as triggering it while doing a Dance of Crescent Moon.]
Name: Dance of the Crescent Moon Rank: A-rank Element: None Skill: Bukijutsu Hand Signs: Seal of Confrontation Description: By manipulating two clones the user drives forth and proceeds by attacking from the above front, mid-right, and mid-left. A single strike from one of these blades will leave a fatal wound, or possibly even death. The attack's speed moves 40 m/s plus the addition of their speed substat. This ability can be deflected if a jutsu with a potency higher than 120 collides with it. Each blade deals 120 damage onto a target. | |
| | | Shinsui
Posts : 28 Join date : 2016-05-11
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Mon May 30, 2016 10:29 pm | |
| Vacuum sword: approved Samurai sabre: I'd say allow the blade to be increased by 15 meters through chakra, the rest is fine. Flash: I would need some kind of damage it would do, does it cause first degree burns or something? The rest seem fine. Rupture: I'd need some info on what stacks, like what it boosts and stuff. Be sure to check the boost rule on jutsu stats. Dance of the crescent moon: approved. Also be sure to make these edits to your original post in this topic so I can quote them when everything is in order | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Tue May 31, 2016 7:10 am | |
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| | | Saint
Posts : 97 Join date : 2016-04-05
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Tue May 31, 2016 1:09 pm | |
| For vacuum sword could you state that its in a direction instead of a radius? Radius makes it seem like its all around you
For Samurai Saber, you need an upkeep per turn if the mode stays active. You also need a size and speed of the projectiles. Giving speed to the projectiles will bring down the strength a bit, because right now its a bit high
Flash looks good to me
For rupture all you need is how much it increases damage by | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Tue May 31, 2016 6:25 pm | |
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| | | Shinsui
Posts : 28 Join date : 2016-05-11
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Wed Jun 01, 2016 5:49 am | |
| Everything seems in order, except for the 45 MPH in samurai sabre. Could you please change that to m/s? Also 45 is too high | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:00 pm | |
| 45 MPH is a 7th grader pitching a baseball ? | |
| | | Shinsui
Posts : 28 Join date : 2016-05-11
| Subject: Re: Canon Bukijutsu Registration Wed Jun 01, 2016 12:05 pm | |
| We prefer m/s for speed, since that's what our speed stat is based on | |
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